Tweety faces a long day at school. He doesn't like it one bit.
(High angle)
During break time, he tells Mati about his plan to escape.
(Low angle, close-up)
For some reason, Mati, who is 8 feet tall, looks down on Tweety to assert his manhood. In the end, he agrees to join him in his escapade.
(Close-up)
All of a sudden, Mati finds a way out! He is thrilled!
(Establishing shot)
Tweety climbs up the Sports Building, convinced it is the way out.
(POV)
Soon Mati joins him, trusting in his leader.
(Low angle)
Tweety nearly falls off, but no one seems to care.
(Extreme close-up)
Mati realizes that the break is nearly over, and decides to give up on the escapade.
Tweety can't believe Mati abandoned him, and decides to mope on a bench inside the school. He questions his existence in the world.
Great work, Tweety, Matias and Tomás. Hilarious captions, I enjoyed reading those, and a decent High School comedy/farce in the making here.
ResponderEliminarTwo points:
1. The close up could be closer, we want to know a specific time.
2. When building a relationship between two characters, don't forget to use Shot/Reverse Shot and or Two Shots...
Great start to film. See you tomorrow.
DF